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Death Note Yaoi Limerick by ~kitoriwitch613:iconkitoriwitch613:



There once was a boy named Light
He was tired of fret and fight
Yet he found at his feet
A devious treat
And using it just seemed so right

A notebook so cruel and so rile
To take the life of the bad and the vile
He would kill off the wicked
When his wrist did a flick’ed
He would cleanse the world by the mile

Yet his heart was a trickery woe
For he loved his deadliest foe
A single letter
Made all the better
And he suffered from this terrible woe

Not to be God was not his goal
Yet, it seemed it was the price for this toll
So he killed the bad
And though he was sad
He was beginning to lose his soul

And then where his lover now lied
Light wept, moped, and cried
Because of his pride
His humanity shied
And he found his lover had died

His soul was shaking and tearing
He felt small in the clothes he was wearing
Why was he scared
That he not even dared
To care for the love they could be sharing

The years came and went
Time he had spent
To grieve for the dead
Before lying in bed
And feeling his heart bent

And when Death swept over and he fell
He knew there was nothing to tell
Yet, to his delight
And mildly fright
His lover had welcomed him to Hell
©2008-2009 ~kitoriwitch613
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Author's Comments

I did this in twenty minutes so that's why it sucks. I was inspired to do a poem and this popped in. I hope you like it.

I grant full permission for :iconlxlight: to post this in their gallery. NOT ANYONE ELSE!

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:icondeceptivefeelings:
Woah. xD

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Make Love, not porn. *lordbeazy


I can't remember when it was good
moments of happiness elude
maybe I just misunderstood.
-Muse:heart:
:iconmirokumustanglee:
8D That's so epic.

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ಠ_ಠ Son, do you KNOW what I have in my pocket?

If your boyfriend sparkles, you're doing it wrong.
:iconkitoriwitch613:
:bow: Thank you. My muse is keeping me company. ^__^

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:iconkitoriwitch613:
Thanks! :D

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:iconmirokumustanglee:
Hahah,yes! :nod:

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ಠ_ಠ Son, do you KNOW what I have in my pocket?

If your boyfriend sparkles, you're doing it wrong.
:iconthursday-surprise:
Win! Epic win!

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It's like shark week with pedophiles!
:iconhearjazzyroar:
aww this makes you feel sorry for Raito
and his poor lover L <3

i like it!!
i agree with ~thursday-surprise WIN! EPIC WIN!

:333

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私はゲームを失った。
(I lost the game. yus.)

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:iconrocais:


Aww, this is beautiful.

I adore this.


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Killing must serve a purpose. Otherwise, It's just plain murder.
:iconbluekiara12:
AMAZING! I love it!

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Shoutouts to friends:
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:iconkitoriwitch613:
Thank you! ^__^ :clap:

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(There used to be a witty sentence here but it joined a union and went on strike)

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